Wow, i really loved this story I didn't expect it to have the Way brothers in it but i'm gad that it did now hehe I think the idea was really great and the things that happened in it were brutally realistic xD Great story :)
This won first place in my contest so heres my detailed comment Detailed but easy to follow, moved fast but unpredictable, well written, characters had raw emotion, the ending was not expected at all! You did a fantastic job and deserve first place.
This won first place in my contest so heres my detailed comment Detailed but easy to follow, moved fast but unpredictable, well written, characters had raw emotion, the ending was not expected at all! You did a fantastic job and deserve first place.
This won first place in my contest so heres my detailed comment Detailed but easy to follow, moved fast but unpredictable, well written, characters had raw emotion, the ending was not expected at all! You did a fantastic job and deserve first place.