If You Weren't So Selfish Then You Might Want to Live - Comments

This is great! Very well-written, and I adore the banner. The main character is interesting and complex- just enough. I love her attitude as a fighter, and I can definitely relate to her indignation at the twins not fighting. However, they should have been hosting their radio show at around this point in the story.

First of all, is this a one-shot or a story?
Second of all, I absolutely adored this! It was amazing, even if I got confused a couple of times, but that's merely due to the fact that I'm one of the slowest people to grace the planet Earth and beyond, but that's beside the point.
Third of all, I loved this<3 I thought the description was nice, the characters were accurate, and you did a great job overall with it.
If this is a one-shot, I say marvelous job, if this is a story, I say update soon(:

And no, I haven't seen HPDHP1.

Can I just marry this story?
It is beyond beautiful.
I love it so freaking much, holy shit.
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