HA SWEET REVENGE! I'm so glad Michael's finally dead. The little skank, he deserved to die from the beginning.
And I always had faith that Zacky wouldn't leave Candace. I mean, he's been talking for the past five chapters about how he's let her go before, thinking it was for the better, but realizing that it wasn't. He clearly wasn't going to leave her. It was just Candace being as pessimistic as ever.
Loved it! I think this one is my favorite so far. =}
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I'm only on Chapter 10, but I'm really liking this story so far! Michael and Logan are assholes, both of them. Just throwing that out there. I have a feeling some shit will hit an industrial power fan and it's gonna get messy when Zacky does find out with Michael's been doing, which he will. And I think Candace should be patient with Zacky about the whole having-a-kid-with-Gena thing...I mean, he didn't freak out about Felicity. I guess it's different since Felicity isn't biological...but still!
Mother flipper on a bus, this is a great story ! I read all the other stories to the trilogy but I was too ingroesed(I cant spell for shit, sorry) in the story to comment. Please write more ! Love it !! <3
Micheal diiieeess!!!! ^_^ *throws a party* aweeessooommme! And good thing the cat's out the bag and Zacky still loves her! Brought a tear to my eye T^T lol awesome update. Travel time for them and waiting time for me lol update!
booyah!! fuckers dead!! and she is not a whore! :'( im so glad Zacky did not turn his back on her yay!! i love that chap the most! XD 101% loved!!! :D more please XD
That.Was.Fucking.Amazing. I was suppose to read this with my friend Gee, But I am the least patient person. Zacky was fucking beast how he tour Michael apart, I'm so happy he is finally out of the picture. Dude, I love this story to death it's like my life. I don't know what i'd do with out it's the only story I actually like and I lalalove it! So you have to keep this story going forever and ever! Even it you merge stories I will still love it, keep going to they die! Yeah well Miss. Sarah-Beth Smith. I love yo' ass and stories. Keep written! And try to update really soon:D I really love this story. :3