I havent even read your story, and i dont want to. Not trying to be mean. But i was just completely turned off by the the utter ridiculousness of the title. The capitalization was awful. Just awful. You need to work on that, it makes you seem like a grammatic mess, and for obvious reasons, i bet you are.
Ahem. It would be called; Blood is My Poison, Let's Have a Party
The killjoys....as vampires....well, it's really original. So is all your work...so yeah. Nawww, Gerard and Ray have a kid. That's hellva cute! And it's Gracie!! I really like this, so you must write moreee! :D
November 28th, 2010 at 02:01am
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