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  • SHADOWS COURTESAN

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    Different...um I'm not really sure what to think
    I did like it though
    Nice job
    January 4th, 2011 at 03:15am
  • Miscreation

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    Woo... Eerie O.o
    I'm currently not quite sure who I am or where I am but that was really good - I quite liked it :D
    January 2nd, 2011 at 10:01pm
  • Gingerbread Nan

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    This was very different and I will admit definitely not what I expected at all but I loved it. It was very suspense filled and interesting to read. It was dark and I love dark just as much as light. Wonderful job, thanks for entering the contest.
    December 30th, 2010 at 03:51am
  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    ew....maggots?
    December 30th, 2010 at 03:44am
  • Angel Devastation

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    This was really awesome I liked it a lot.
    December 30th, 2010 at 03:35am
  • Sixxgirl

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    i'm not the biggest fan of guts n' gore, but that was awsome. i could see soo clearly in my head. extraordnary job.
    December 30th, 2010 at 01:39am
  • NothanksImgood

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    o.O no wonder you beat me out...
    *bows* honorable loss, it was...
    still...just wow...that was freaking intense!
    December 28th, 2010 at 03:54am
  • chrissie.marie

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    Okay, so I swear to goodness that I commented on this, but as of yet there is no proof of that. So I shall comment again.
    I just found the comment I made - it was on your Facebook post! Ha! Told you so!
    Anyway, rant over. Here's what my Facebook comment said:
    "I read it. I was good. Rather dark and I was a bit confused, but it was good. :)"
    And to this minute I agree with that. :)
    December 17th, 2010 at 01:13am
  • Undead Angel

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    That was awesomely insane in many ways. Wow, that was worded amazingly. Great job! :D
    December 14th, 2010 at 12:45am
  • Lady Venturestein

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    So, I read this around midnight last night and fell in love, but, unfortunately, I also fell asleep shortly after. lol. Babygirl, I tell you time and time again that you are magnificent in your writing, especially the weird, twisted, mind-warped, fucked royally every way possible stuff and I love it. (:
    November 29th, 2010 at 05:23pm
  • ShadowsFiction

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    Um, I am so confused but it was good. I am assuming it was based on the song?
    November 29th, 2010 at 05:07pm
  • kristyn_alysia

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    So, I guess I owe you a comment, don't I?
    Well, let's just say, that was creepy in the best way possible.
    I enjoyed it, but Danii, you have an odd mind.
    I love you! <3
    November 29th, 2010 at 02:02pm
  • DisneylandAcidTrip;

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    That one was very different..But I like different :) I love how I could picture everything! It was insane, but a good insane..Great entry!
    November 28th, 2010 at 05:55am
  • The Rev.

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    Holy shit! That was so fucking awesome. I could picture everything happening like, perfectly! That shit was insane. In the best way :D I loved it !
    November 28th, 2010 at 05:36am
  • goodbyeeeee

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    Holy fuck.
    What just happened.
    November 28th, 2010 at 04:37am
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