Until I Get Caught Red-Handed. - Comments

OKAY THAT IS NOT RAMBLING SENTENCES AND IT MAKES A LOT OF SENSE.
I'm expecting like, a drabble, and you give me THIS?!

But anyways.
First of all, I love love love the idea of Zack, Jack and Alex being secret agents, or whatever they are. And also I love the idea of them in black suits. And Rian being their boss. I just think that whole thing is hilarious.
I sort of wish there was more information about the crime and such, like the myth Alex was talking about and the actual circumstances and such, and what was in the box and… yeah. Just the crime part of it in general. I get that it's character-driven and was written in a day and all, but I think it could be a lot better than it already is if you took the time to think some of that stuff out.

I reeeally liked it. Sad, but it was good. (:

bdskbdfkjsfv BABIES NOOOOOO :( :( :(
This is sad Sav :( They can't both die :( :(
What happened to Zack?
Good writing though :)