These Big City Dreams - Comments

What an absolute douche. Seriously, what was he thinking?! Is he really that pathetic? She was right by what she said, he just can't face that. He done that out of spite, like a child. Well he's made his bed, he needs to lay in it. I can't wait for the sequel to begin, soon I hope? <3

its about time they finally got together !
cant wait for more <3

noooooooooooooo
she cant leave :(
her and john have to realise their love for eachtother and make beautiful children together <3

hahahahaha at “It specifically says on my invite ‘+1 (but not Tiffany, keep her away John Cornelius!)’. It was hand written by Emily, she absolutely hates Tiffany. Loathes her is more fitting.” that was perfect. Geez, John should just break up with Tiffany already, it's obvious that everybody hates her and it's obvious that he likes Lia more!

i love this story! John was being an ass to Garrett, but does Garrett have i thing for Lia? cause then thats just gonna cause a whole bunch of drama between them! And i wonder what John is gonna do with his three part apology, it better be damn good cause if i were Lia i wouldnt forgive him that fast cause he was being a huge asshole. Anyways cant wait for the next chapter<3

I LOVE THIS ONE TOO! I wish John would stop being a poophead. He keeps on meddling in places that he shouldn't be meddling in. He really didn't need to barge in on Garrett and say that he wasn't over Rachael. but omg I'm still freaking out over John kissing Lia! bhsdaigjnraeoihg!!!! HE DEFINITELY LIKES HER! I bet in the rest of the day he's gonna ask her out!

Aw, this chapter was cute with John getting jealous of Garrett. I love it!

amazing.
i am speechless <3

LOVE this storyyy <333 I can't wait for more!

Steven is gonna come back too. And it's gonna suck. I just want John to kick his ass!

So great! As always.

WHEN ARE JOHN AND LIA GONNA BIPPITY BOP THE BOOPITY BOO!???!?!??!?!!??!

I was like O_O The wholeee timee.
Fuck Steven .

I hope John beats Steven's ass!!! Part 1 of 2?
Part 2 tonight maybe? So anxious!

Geez, Steven needs to calm down! I wanna punch HIM in the face! Or send out my Italian mafia on him! but I do like this, Steven just needs to go haha

please update soon (:

yes! I'm already excited for the next chapter!

You would name it that.......

I like the new bond between Garrett and Lia! Maybe she'll stop thinking about John since he's taken and she'll start liking Garrett! But then again that would somehow turn back around to John since it is a John fic hahaha

update soon, I really like this!

Me likey! :D More soon, yeah?

I think Lia needs a friend...