THIS IS THE BEST INCEST I'VE EVER READ IN MY LIFE!!!! :D I love this pairing, I love the storyline, I love your writing styles! Man this awesome :) more soon?
P.S. Kissing In Cars is an amazing song. The last chapter made me smile so much :D
Woah, brahh. So you guys saved my life with this update. See, Im at my omas house..bored...its my anniversary and my boyfriend has disappeared...and did I meantion that I am BORED. This was my only update. ILOVEYOUGUYS. Fo rizzle. Byebye
omg update yesss :D this chapter does not suck, what are you talking about!!! I thought it was so cute how Vic showed up and just played that song, it fit so perfectly. and awwww at the end <3
two updates in two days, omg! you have no idea how happy this made me :D regarding the previous chapter, I just wanted to say Jaime is such an awesome friend and I'm glad he didn't freak out on Mike (although that could have been funny...). and omg, Florence + The Machine in the title <3 now to the current chapter; Jaime keeps being an amazing friend which is great 'cause I admit, in the beginning I didn't really like him, and when he persuaded Vic to go see Remy with him I almost hated him, but then it started to show that he's really caring and that's sweet. I love how you mentioned the nail polish in the beginning. "Look alive, sunshine" = A+++ quote! and then when Vic beat up Remy, hell yes! I was totally cheering for him in my mind, haha. you gotte give him some credit, though, for pointing out the significance of the time stamp to Vic. FINALLY he realized what really happened. now they can make up!!! (hopefully)
(sorry for the long-ish comment but this made me so happy that I felt the need to tell you all of these things :3)
this was beautiful! I love how they went on the roof, it was so cute <3
this story is the best!