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  • WakeMeUpWhenIt'sOver

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    Heyyy! I just read your story in like two days XD Two lonngg days!
    I dunno if this is the ending or not, but if it isn't, update soonnnn!! PLease!
    July 11th, 2013 at 05:32pm
  • PhenoBarbiDoll

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    Wow! I really liked this. And I see what you meant about it reminding you of Megan and Brian in "Womanizer." Lol. Only the reverse: he felt more strongly for her to begin with than she felt for him. But NOW the question is up...will she stop hurting him and give herself the chance to be truly happy, or will she keep pushing him away and turn to her OLD way of relieving her pain? I really hope you can work through your block and finish this. I'd like to see where you take it next, especially now that the other guys are, um, "babysitting" Brian and Braiden. Lol.
    February 4th, 2013 at 10:14am
  • bob morley

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    I really like the idea for this story. It may seem a bit cliche, basing it off of Jimmy's death, but you really took it to a new level and I like that. It makes it seem more appealing. You also did a really good job on portraying how Braiden feels about his passing and what she feels even after time has passed. I also loved how you steadily grew the tie between Brian and Braiden. It is a very good story and I will be subscribing after I finish typing up this comment :) Good writing and a good read. Can't wait for more updates!
    June 5th, 2012 at 05:04am
  • UnbreakMe;UnchainMe

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    Sorry I took so long to comment! Spring break is crazy.
    Anyways! Things are getting intense! Dx
    March 18th, 2012 at 06:50pm
  • sullenriotxx

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    YES!An update!Come on guys, give Brian a break.He is doing the very best he can.And he does love her and he is taking care of her and he isnt just having sex with her he loves her.And even though I'm sure Jimmy wouldn't have liked the sex part,I'm sure he would proud of Brian for takin care of her.Brian does a good job!Oh snap crackle and pop!!!Weelll..I wonder how every thing is going to go down?Oh my.. Braiden..Come one,don't say that Ik u love him.Come on girl,you do I know you do!!Damn that was a good chapter!I can't freaking wait for more!!!Update soon hun!!
    March 18th, 2012 at 12:21am
  • sullenriotxx

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    AAAAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!YEA!!!!FINALLY AN UPDATE!I love swimming too so I don't blame her for loving to swim :).Lolz.Yep,she's turning into a fish!Brian,I hope you love aquatic animals lol jk jk.Brian,you would like a penis if it was purple lol!I don't blame you though because purple is my favorite color as well.Oh,well that would make sense that she doesn't wear a bikini.Allthough,
    Mederma will clear those scars right up hunni.But regardless,if she feels more comfortable in a one peice,then that's all that matters.

    Aaaaw,that was nice of him to buy her a bathing suit,that he though was hot but still respected her body and herself.AAAHHH!!OH SHIT!!!!!Johnny!Forget what you saw,forget what you saw!!!Damnit!!Gues the cat is out of the bag.Aaaw Bri,I'm sure she didn't mean it.She was probably just saying that because the guys were there.Oh lordy!Update soon!I have GOT to freaking know what is goin to happen next!!!AAAAAHHHH!!!UPDATE SSSOOOOOOOONNN!!!Love it!!!
    March 17th, 2012 at 06:08am
  • sullenriotxx

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    Ha ha!Hell yea for an update!!!Made my freakin day!!Im glad that Brian and Brai are getting more comfortable and settled with each other.Lol poor girl and all o her damn hickies.Lol been there ha ha.That dress is beautiful!Yes Brai,give him a chance.You know that he loves you so much and that he would do anything for you.And I firmly believe that Brian would need leave you.He loves you too much.Lolz at Brian and his boners!Maybe he needs a cold shower lol Great update hun I really liked this chapter!!Update soon please !!!Im so excited to see what happens next!!!
    March 7th, 2012 at 05:59am
  • UnbreakMe;UnchainMe

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    It's really not fair that I have to keep quiet. :/ I guess imma gonna have to, and I had totally forgotten about the hickeys lol I still remember that convo though. XD
    Keeping my mouth shut lalalalalalalalalalalala
    March 6th, 2012 at 05:59pm
  • Beautifully-Broken

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    loved it. at least time its wasnt really a cliffhanger ending. i hate those lol.
    February 27th, 2012 at 12:06am
  • sullenriotxx

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    Aaaaaw!That is so sweet that Brian is taking her out.It really is,because they deserve something like that!OMG! Braiden's dress is just beautiful! And lolz at Brian for getting horny looking at her.Thats cute and funny at the same time. Aaaaw.He makes her just feel special!Yea I figured they wouldnt be able to keep their hands off of eachother!Damn you Matt!!!!!They were trying to get their freak on u ner der!! Geesh!Go be with Va like Bri said you mood killer!Lol.Aaaw! Ji Jimmy u sneak!Lol yep Jimmy does know everything!He is smarticles!Love him.Ok girl,you gotta tell him you love him!You just gotta!!!LOOOVED THE UPDATE!This was a sweet chapter!Update soon hun!I can't wait for more!
    February 26th, 2012 at 11:22pm
  • UnbreakMe;UnchainMe

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    That was so sweet! It was adorable!

    I forgot what happens next so good news is that i can't spoil anything!
    February 26th, 2012 at 09:17pm
  • sullenriotxx

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    AAAAHHH!!!!An update!I love this story so freakin much.Thus comment,is unfortunatly going to be short due to the fact that i am in a hurry to leave!But lol she drug him off to Gena and Zacky's!!Great effing update!
    February 26th, 2012 at 12:38am
  • UnbreakMe;UnchainMe

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    Lol I just noticed that the dress was too much for a movie xP. I'm half asleep so ignore any mistakes you see, I just hope I have autocorrect on my side to night.

    Anyways, I'm excited for the valentines day dinner, I love the dress for it, but I forgot what goes down in that chapter Dx.

    And yes yes, I know, hurry with your smut!
    February 25th, 2012 at 08:22am
  • sullenriotxx

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    Aaaaahhhh YAAAAY!!!!Another update!Whoop whoop!!!Ahaahahahahaha thats cute how Brian just stood there watching her dance,letting her do her thing.I would have been embarrassed though.He he. That's just me though.I like when they are jut sweet with each other.Dancing,snuggling and whatnot.Lol I can just imagine Brian dancing.It's amusing lol.But again them dancing to lgether and then kissing but restraining themselves is cute.Aha!So he admits he is addicted to her as well!Come on Brai,tell him you love him already,you know you want to!You know how much you care for him!!Just do it,there is nothing to it!!

    I'm so happy for them in this chapter.They just seem so guinuenly happy,and that makes me happy !!Great chapter Hun!!!I soooo can't wait for more.
    February 22nd, 2012 at 05:08pm
  • jessicastewart

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    this was such a good chapter and that song by maroon 5? its probably my new favorite song ive never heard it before now and its truly amazing. Brian and Braiden need to get together soon i want them to sooooo bad they are sooooooo cute together. also i kinda miss the rest of the group, in the beginning they were a semi big part of this story and now its kinda dwindled off to it mostly being her and him hmmmmmmmmmm idk just some food for thoughts :)
    February 22nd, 2012 at 01:14pm
  • UnbreakMe;UnchainMe

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    Lol when the song first came on (in the story), I was like, "What the fuck is up with this random song?" then i reread the lyrics and I started cracking up because I was the one that told you about the song and I had forgotten that you were going to use it there. Whoops my bad.

    Aww, Braiden shouldn't be scared, she should go tell Brian how she feels cause I feel bad for Brian thinking that Braiden is just using him. *sigh*

    <3
    February 22nd, 2012 at 04:06am
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    I hope she doesn't push Brain away to much longer.
    February 21st, 2012 at 09:11pm
  • sullenriotxx

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    Whew!!Good,I suppose.I would have been happy either way but EEEEEPPSSS that Brian found out.Oh Bro don't freak out.She wan't doing it to hurt you she was doing to protect you.I understand ur anger Bri,I do ,I really do but she thought she was doing what's best.*Gasps*Brian Elwin Haner!You quit acting like a five year old and you tell her what the damned tests were!Thats just mean.What she did and what you are doing,to me at least are two completely different things.She did it to spare you pain,you did it to be an ass.Poor Brai.Even though I think Brian could have handled that better,she should have told him but again,I totally understand her reason why she didn't.No Brian,don't leave her.Well I'm glad he came back.Please don't give up on her!!!You guys were getting there!!!Just hang in there buddy!!!AAAAHHHH!!!!!So happy this is updated but mow you have to update again becuase I neeeeeed to know what happens next!!!UPDAE SOOOON!!!!!
    February 21st, 2012 at 06:36am
  • UnbreakMe;UnchainMe

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    and freak out over what's gonna happen next. *
    February 21st, 2012 at 05:34am
  • UnbreakMe;UnchainMe

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    hahahah! I knew it! XP Now I'm debating if I should just spoil everything :P
    February 21st, 2012 at 05:34am