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  • captainzetty

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    Hmmmmmmmmmm.

    Me gusta :D :D :D :D
    December 21st, 2010 at 08:14pm
  • FigureSkaterrr_

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    I didn't know this was on buzznet?! But I thought I read it somewhere when I read the first chapter so it makes sense. haha.
    Love, btw<3
    December 2nd, 2010 at 01:19am
  • fireworks.

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    I really like this story, but you sometimes mess up the POVs. The 3rd person starts telling but then it turns into Alex's pov. And also you make some grammar mistakes. Fix 'em all and this will be a great story :)
    December 1st, 2010 at 04:50pm
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