I love the idea of your story, really. The whole fact that her best friend left and suddenly he's back! It's catchy (; The only thing is try to make chapters longer, and do not rush it please, it's a really good plot!! Continueee!
December 31st, 2010 at 03:56am
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though I want to
see whats next!!
Update soon please!!
XD