Alright i've caught up, Lexi is one of those characters that I personally thought was pretty rad. Damon killling her was a dick move. It wasn't really cool but Emma should be more involved wether or not Damon wants her to be.
YAY LEXI! I seriously love her, and I think your right about what you said in your author comment by the way. But I'm kind of hoping it might not happen now, but I don't think the chances are that good. Now that I think about it.
I haven't decided on the counsil thing, I simply can't make up my mind.
:O Dude. She should be part of the Council. I wasn't even thinking about it until you mentioned it, but that would be awesome! DRAMADRAMADRAMA. Oh, man. I'm excited. xD - WatchesFromShadows
I really don't know about the counsil thing. She is the quiet type after all. But she also wants to help, and then again, would Damon even let her if she tried?
If you need help with some of the dialogue and need to know how to incorporate Emma in some more go read this story: http://www.wattpad.com/972367-%E1%83%A6-a-melted-heart-%E1%83%A6-damon-salvatore
This girl is doing the exact same thing you are doing and maybe you could get some inspiration from it.
I woder if Emma's presense will give a different oucome in things for Jeremy and Damon. I'm not sure it will, maybe in some ways. But as it was said in another comment, it is the quite ones you have to watch. so I'm probably in for a surprise (well a couple probably..)
This story = crackcrackcrack! Feed my addiction! =D I really like this whole beginning part of the story, because how Emma interacts with Damon, all light and funny, is so different than what we saw of Damon at this part of the show. =) It's really refreshing! - WatchesFromShadows
Emma's kinda quiet you always have to watch the quiet ones. I like her already. As for the stefan gift thingy maybe something from his old life like his mother's locket that Emma somehow got ahold of. Something like that.
I just seem to notice that you play the scene the original way while Emma just stands there. That tends to be frustrating so how about sometimes you divide lines that other characters were suppose to say and make Emma say them, to make her seem more involved you know? Other than that I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!