Secrets of the Forest - Comments

I so love how Andrew says things like he's stating the obvious. "What the matter? I just ate her soul is all. Jeez, why're you over-reacting like that, she's not dead."

xD

Oo-er :) Do keep writing!

Interesting enough. Your writing skills could improve, Locke, but the plot is good enough to keep me reading. ;D

I do want to read more. So, hurry it up, Sna- I mean, Locke!

This is really good so far, would love more :)

I have arrived as promised! ^^
And I am rather curious as to what happens next too! I hope the evil plot bunnies destroy that wall known as writer's block X3
(and in case you haven't figured out who I am yet, its Kaniah from JD)

Nice start!

O_O...What's in that forest? I want to know! ^-^ Keep writing because I can't wait to read what's next!

You have to keep writing more! the prolouge is intense! (: I loved It. <3
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Hannah<3 ♱

Your prolouge is really good, I hope yoiu continue I want to know what happened to bethane!

you've got me interested, keep writing :P, please?