A Gentle Reminder, That Life is Unkind. - Comments

Like all the other comments, I also was intrigued by the writing style you present in this piece. Even though I am not sure of who the band is, your writing provides me with somewhat of an understanding of where it is leading to. Your ability to truly describe your setting and your character really sets a picture in the minds of your audience. I would like to read more of the story and see where it actually leads to. I like the chemistry between Emma and Jona since it seems that they have a certain understanding towards each other. I was unsure at first if I would really be involved with this story since I tend to be really picky when it comes to fanfiction but I felt there was an originality to this in which was noticed through your style of writing.

To be honest, I'm really not a very big fan of Bring Me The Horizon, but I've read the start of your story and I have to say it seems interesting and I just LOVE the way that you use correct spelling, punctuation and use paragraphs. There is nothing worse than reading a story where the writer forgets to use all of that.

Well done with your writing style, and good luck for the rest of your story!

By the end of the first paragraph I could tell your writing style was unique and I was a little sceptical but I love it! It definitely is a good unique and leads a beautifully written and entertaining story. The best comment swap has given me. <3

First few sentences into this story I automatically liked your writing. You seriously know how to grab a readers attention. You have an amazing writing style and it seems to me that you have quite a lot of talent when it comes to writing as well. I think it's safe to say that I'll be reading more of this story and I'm hooked on it! It's seriously just that good and I NEVER seem to like stories this much. I'm not a big fan of BMTH but, this certainly is a well written fan-fiction. You organize your writing very well, it's simple yet it comes off as being very descriptive. You describe the characters feelings extremely well and you seem to have thought out this story very much. The plot seems very consistent and interesting which is always good because it keeps the story for becoming boring.

So before I read this, I had no idea who Jona was. I knew about Bring Me The Horizon and all but I never actully seen any stories about him. But I'm so glad that this story was recommended to me by the comment swap. I don't usually read bring me the horizon band members stories but this is the best one I've ever actually took time to read! It's Written so well and puts a a lot of details into each chapter. I love how you write Emma and also the way you write Jona. I am defiantly going to subscribe to this story! It's fantastic :) i can not wait for the next chapter to come out and see what happens. Hopefully Emma can get her life straightened up and live happily ever after with Jona!!!

I've never read anything that was Jona, and I had never really even HEARD of Jona before this fic! haha!
but this is truly, beautifully written. as ive said a lot on mibba, it can sometimes be hard to find genuinely good stories or genuinely talented authors on mibba. it can be so frustrating when you're searching for something good and you can't find it. but this story didn't disappoint, it's very good. I caught on fast and the characters in here seem like they were really thought out, thought out very well. which, again, many authors fail to do.
this is truly a great story, so please keep up the good work and update soon!!! :-)

I have never read a Jona fic, and so I am actually quite excited to try this one out. I've only read the first chapter so far, but I am looking forward to getting home after school. I am not sure how I feel about Emma yet, so I guess I'll keep you posted once I figure her out. The layout is brilliant though!

This is amazing! Was a little apprehensive when I first clicked on to the story page as there was no indication as to who it would be about... Upon clicking 'chapter one' I was delighted to see it was Jona! Really glad that you changed it from a Rou Reynolds fic, as much as I love him, Jona is better! Just a heads up, you never changed your 'Rou's to 'Jona's in chapter seven, I think it were! xx

such a great story, honestly. your characters have so much depth and just... it's just beautiful, your descriptions. the layout is nice and easy to read so that's always a plus, too. please say you're going to update someday, because i want to know what happens next.

I'm officially addicted. Thanks a lot. Lol

This is a really fantastic story, and I love how you've built up the characters, and their emotions, but have still left a lot to the imagination. I also must say that your descriptions are ace.
I see you haven't updated in a while, though, and that's a shame. Will you still be continuing this story?

I've been waiting for this story to be updated and I was not letdown. <3

I've missed this story. A lot.

Ugh, this is so presh I don't even know what to say. I can't wait to see what happens when they finally speak. I'm interested to see what Emma has to say.
<3

Love this. <3

Rou gifs? I can't wait to see those...and read more...because I'm hooked. Lol :)

So great. That's really all I can say. I get excited when I see this has been updated. <3

Oh yes, this cleared loads up :)
jkfajsdkljfla this story makes me really happy, ok?

Oh gosh I love this. This is going to be one of my favorite stories on here. I can tell. I can't wait for more. <3

I'm not keen on Enter Shikari but I am SO keen on this story... if that makes sense? more more more! ♥