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I'm gonna be honest about this, I'm afraid to move my curtain now O.o
I remember I had a dream that scared me to death, I avoided staring out of the window and even going in the back of my house, because it terrified me so much, this kind of reminded me of it. I saw that stupid little green man at my window all over again, *shudders*
Needless to say, it gave me massive chills and you managed to scare me.
It was great though, I loved how it was written and I'm glad my friend recommended me to read this.

THAT WAS AMAZING.(: and I was actually scared

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had moved in with us and enjoyed messing us around.
^ is that correct grammar?(:

This thing gave me chills and it was seriously just so interesting. It brought me in so well. <3

Bah, you found my guilty pleasure. I love scary things, but damn do I hate them at the same time.
x]

When I first started reading, I noticed it was in first, and I was kind of like "meh" because it's sort of hard to pull it off really good, but I think that the perspective was perfect for this story, made it seem more real, alive?

Overall, it was certainly pretty damn creepy. I'm not going to lie, when you said footsteps my mind immediately jumped to Paranormal Activity. But if your story was made into a movie, it'd probably be 10x scarier. I keep picturing that... thing in my mind. >.<

I like that you had a sort of thing instead of like, random ring chick. Everyone always has that random ring chick- this was sort of original in that refreshing way. I really like the thingy-thing. And I absolutly loved the ending of "FOUND YOU" I thought that it was brilliant.

The only sort of like, go more into the fear that she felt inside. Y'know? More detail about how she was scared at the beginning in her bed. I would've liked that more.
Oh, and hard for to understand
you to understand?

Otherwise, this was definitely great and totally gave my chills(:

Oh my gosh that was seriously scary! Very, very chill inducing and I'm definitely not too proud to say that I looked over my shoulder at the very end because I was so creeped out. You've done an absolutely masterful job with this, really and truly. Incredible!

but it’ll be hard for to understand unless I think you should take out for

Not even in to the second paragraph you already gripped me tight in to this story, it's like having a face to face conversation all alone in a big house at night.

The small houses are a little odd... I know its probably a hint or something.

shadowy figure was a blessing compared to what I saw that night. I was literally like *gasp* =O *leans closer to screen as if it's speaking to me in a whisper that shouldn't be heard by others*

Lol oh now I get the House thing. Great story =] I have a similar experience from a house we lived at when I was younger but it wasn't a negative thing.

Masterfully done...you set it up perfectly. And man, now I'm freaked out.
I love the style you wrote it in, of short little normal entries. Makes it much more..personal and intense. It's not something I've seen on here before, and I like it.
Layout could be a little creepier; that's my only con/crit :)

Creepy. Chillssss.
:D

So, I'm trying to fix all of my epic fails from last night. Commenting on this is one of them. I got distracted for a few hours when I was supposed to be catching up on stuff like this, then remembered the pressing real life obligations that took up the rest of my night. XD

So, can I just started by saying, "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!"? Thank you.

Seriously. Scary. I don't like.

Well, I do. But SCARY!

I don't think I have much else to say, because now I have a freaky, Tim Burton-y ghost face in my head, and I'm sitting next to a window, and I'm scared to look out now. . . Though, technically speaking, I was scared to look out before, because it's snowing, and the snow is stupid.

Oh, my gosh. I got chills. Sitting at my laptop, I felt like something was going to happen.

I loved how it started out in real time, went back and explained everything, then ended again in real time. That just made it so much creepier.

I wish I had more to say about this. It was really awesome; you're really talented!