Diamonds Aren't Forever, Dear Lucy - Comments

Gxhecbchnhvrdeaaexpio..!! Dear lord, update woman! This is crazy! In only three fuckin chapters you've made me, like, completely and utterly attached. I love it. Oliver is portrayed perfectly, he's still arrogant and smug and incredibly Oli-ish, but you've also managed to realistically give him all these contrasting personality traits that make you looovveee him (more than any Oli Sykes fan already does ;). And Lucy is great; you've written her relationship problems flawlessly. Like how she likes her boyfriend, but Oli still drives her crazy. AND it's only been three chapters SOO, I can only imagine what it's gonna be like by the end. Can't wait for an update!

xx Saskia

i'm glad you're continuing to write this. but if i may, i have a few constructive comments.
1) you have an umpteen number of typos and grammar errors.
2) i know you're trying to write the dialogue using english accents but your yahs, yeahs, and yehs are getting a bit confusing.

i can fully understand using 'yeh' in place of 'you' because that's what it sounds like in an english accent but their 'yeahs' sound like 'yeah'. you should right them as such because for me it's very annoying to decipher the differences in your writing

Cute(:

Pleasantly surprised you updated (: keep it up!

love the story!!!

I like this story! More soon!

Dang, lucy let him make her food and everything.. Poor little oli...

Ps, you have yourself a new subscriber. [:

Golly, this story is good! I almost fell in love with itt. Pleaseeeee, may i ask, continue? :D

this story is too cute :3

okay.. not gonna lie, I didn't realize it was a flashback sort of thing until i read the comments that said they were.. the story makes a bit more sense now. haha. I like this story; update soon!

This is pretty good so far keep updating.:)

i like this a lot! i also have to agree, i was a bit confused with the second part but then i also did realize what it was c: but none the less, this is really good and i can't wait to see where this all goes, into a lot of drama i hope. update again soon, i'm excited to read more!

i like it. i was a bit confused on the second part but quickly discovered that it was the situation that happened prior to the first part.

keep going, lovey (:

I Like it! :D
It made my day HAPPY! ahahaha