November 30th, 2010 at 12:52am
This is really good, it should've gotten more readers and commenters. :)
First, the layout and banner are really pretty. They're so soft. <3
Second, I like the idea of a blind girl, it isn't the most original thing, but it's original enough.
Your writing was very good also, descriptive and everything.
Although, this seems like it was going to be the summary to the story, it just kept me waiting for more.
Either way, good job. :) <3
I've never read anything on here about anyone being blind.
You pulled it off well in only 102 words!
You conveyed a lot of emotion in this, and I look forward to seeing you put up more writing :3