Drenched In Sin - Comments

this story is sooo good i love the twist it has to it! i honestly cannot wait for more!

This story amazing..I can't wait to read more soon xD

i'm definitely digging this story. it's a very interesting concept and i like the way the characters are portrayed. and i definitely love your writing.

ooooh my God! Did not expect that, Johnny seemed the stronger of the two lol. I looove how you incorporated B&H into it, pretty sick. You know i love it and can't wait for more

go christ he needs a lil relief

Syn. Definately Syn, that's who i would seee. mmmmmmmm... He'd be walking funny for a week lol. Loved the update. Can't wait to see if the kill Greed in the next chapter, i love the twists and turns! I keep forgetting to ask but who's the chick in the banner? I know who it is but i can't put the name to the face

Ooooooo Nearly some Johnny sexy time there =D Your writing gets better and better, its unbelievable. I love that your leaving us hanging... Does Greed know they're are there or not? are there traps or not? Excited? I think so =) <3

That was amazeballs!
I love the way you describe your scenes with that dark, otherwordly vibe. It's unlike a lot of other stories and it's incredibly addicting, because I like things that are slightly warped, if you will.
Yet, I find this extremely realistic, in a way. The tension between the characters maybe?
Gah, it's hard to explain, but the point is that I fucking love it.
Especially the naughty scenes! Hah, you're very good at those!
And now I'm even more stoked to see what happens next.
Hah, you're writing is simply fantastic!

Bronie, you are amazing. MOAR PL0X NAO. <3

So, I missed some updates, but I just read them and I have to say: they were outrageously good.
I can't get over the plot of this story. It's completely different than anything I've ever read, and what makes it better is that your writing is out of this fucking world. You're extremely talented. :]
And a sex scene with Gates! Haha, mm, I thought it was totally sexy and very nicely detailed.
Plus, I love how you left that last chapter on sort of a cliffhanger.
I'm really anxious to see what this "added reason" is.
More soon please!

Eeeeekkk. I really want to know what the added reason is but my hangover is preventing me from thinking about anything other than water ha. I really loved the way you described Jimmy, calm but menacing. Nice. Brilliant update =)

i meant helm also =) Baha, you get two comments from me, lucky

I can't believe you havent gotten more comments than this already.... =| I'm apulled at every single mibbian, it's an excellent story and i love how different it is, not just with the plot line but with the characters also. Usually in such stories you always find Matt and Brian as the head honchos, it's good to see Captain Jimmy at the held for a change.
I love the amount of detail you put in to the chapters too, shows how much effort your putting in. I absolutely love it and i really cant wait 'til your next update, it makes me want the chapters longer ha. I'm extremely impaitent =)

This is absolutely astounding, for a few reasons.
1. Excellent word choice. You have such a clever, unique way of phrasing things.
2. Good use of characterization. Lilith in particular has an extremely realistic personality & I love the way you portrayed the guys of Avenged Sevenfold.
3. Very descriptive, to the point that I can picture everything that's happening with perfect clarity.
4. The elements of evil and sin give the whole thing a really vibe.
In short... I'm really diggin' this. :]
I'm subscribing! And I can't wait 'til your next update!