GAH!!!! MIBBA IS SO LAME! It never told me that you updated.... I'm ONLY 20 chapters behind. This really pisses me off. Anyway, I'm off to catch up and shall be back to tell you how awesome, cool, amazing, fabulous, etc... you are.
I REALLY don't like Matt. As for Jake, he's amazing. And Alex, he's adorable. And Laney, great girl. And Colton? HE NEEDS TO GET THE FUCK PUT OF LANEY'S DTOMACH ALREADY SO I CAN BE THE WEIRDO I AM AND GUSH OVER IT!! EEP <3
Lex makes him sound like a girl hehehe. love it bestie. just when you're writing dialogue could you try and make it clear on whos talking? Im getting kind of confused haha miss you <333
Love the update. As I said before, I don't like th name Colton. (Sorry!) and I don't really have any ideas on what you could change it to however I do have an idea on HOW you could change it without it being totally random (if you wanted to that is) :)
I love this story but (absolutely no offense intended) I don't really like the name Colton. Sorry! I really don't mean to be rude or mean but I just like when people give me feedback and I thought I would give you some. But I really do like this story! :)