I really like this :) I like the way you decided to use the picture. Unique :)
However, thought you might like to know: the part where you said Tom Riddle Jr. Had had....the first had shouldn't start a new sentence. Also...there's a tiny mistake with one of the links in your summary.
Apart from that. I really enjoyed it. I've asked myself the same question you have proposed....Would they have let him come?Great job. Thanks for joining :D
However, thought you might like to know:
the part where you said Tom Riddle Jr. Had had....the first had shouldn't start a new sentence. Also...there's a tiny mistake with one of the links in your summary.
Apart from that. I really enjoyed it. I've asked myself the same question you have proposed....Would they have let him come?Great job. Thanks for joining :D