What's Your Story? - Comments

I get how you feel about sites being banned at school. Luckily for me, this isn’t one of them where I go.

Really enjoyed this, especially liked the comment on ‘bright and early’.

Bert does seem like a fucking creep. I would... keep my distance from that guy if i were Frank.

That's adorable. Really, it is. It's rather sweet and comforting knowing that Gerard isn't a total arse.

I enjoy this story. It's an interesting read, if i may say so myself.

Update as soon as you can, wont you?

Another good read that kept me entertained. I hope to read more.

I'll update as soon as I possibly can, I promise. It probably won't be tomorrow, but you can count on Monday. Yeah, I know. I think the baby fat is cute too, but I couldn't really find much that isn't about him. You've got to work with what you've got, yeah? Haha <3

Baby fat as a turn off? I think it's cute >.<

This story's interesting. Update soon, wont cha?

I like this! :D
It's cute and funny and the over all frerard-ness is just adorable.

I would appreciate it deeply if you updated this really, really soon.

I've spotted a few mistakes. Such as not capitalizing the first letter in a sentence, and leaving the M from Mikey. But, nothing too terrible, just typos. Work on that and this'll be perfect :D

Thanks :] yeah, I noticed those when I went back and fixed them. I'll work on the descriptives, though.

I’ve spotted coding mistakes. Instead of using these brackets <>, use [].

I thought it was well written, perhaps a little more description needed though.

I enjoyed it and will read more if you post more.