Originally I was slightly mad that you beat me to Avenged Sevenfold in the contest, but eh, you found it first, you got it :D This was great though. I really felt for her and I love the ending, I mean, the entire scene before he died. I love how you used those lines in the story and I can't believe there isn't any comments for this. I loved it.
I loved it.
Good luck in the contest.