This is so precious. I like everything except the first line. It doesn't really fit in with the rest of the story to me. How he makes who cry? But everything else is adorable.
I'd hate to say the exact same thing that's on the other two comments, but this was really cute :)
I have to admit, though, I expected some lovey dovey story where everything was happy and perfect. It seems a little more realistic, since it's not like some perfect little love story, but has parts where it is sort of fluffy and happy, and others where it's more... Realistic? I don't know, just not fluffy and happy.