Vibrations of the Heart - Comments

Caroline stares at the full moon hanging above the naked branches of the forest.
^ thats a beautiful desciption(:

I aboustly loved this story it was so scary then cute(: not really scary but it like worried me ha ha and I loved how I could imagine things

Well, I'm not big for stuff like this, but I thought you wrote pretty well, and the banner/layout were nice.
Your dialogue was written well also and everything seemed to flow.
Although I think this is more of a short story rather than a drabble (drabbles are usually closer to 100 words), I think it was pretty good overall.

When she turns, Tyler stares at her with his hands cupped over his family jewels, an uncomfortable frown on his lips.

Best line ever.

I really would love to see this continued. I've been toying with the idea of writing a Tyler/Caroline full on story, but I think you'd give it more justice than I ever could. Even so, this is fantastic and I really enjoy stalking your TVD one shots.