Duuuuuuuuuuude!!!! You just can't leave us hanging like that I really really really really want to know what's going to happen D: *sniff sniff* you're going to make me cry :'(
I really love how Elsie thought Emily was Anastasia, haha I need more of Draco and Elsie action!!! Hekaisbeuwnkandjakasddchkzlahdgwnw!!!! Im literally making the most unattractive noises from my mouth because I need more. I feel like I'm gonna die without this O-O PLEASEEEEEEEEEE!!! BEFORE I START MAKING MORE WEIRD NOISES AGAIN ....TNSTJTJTNXHKKDrssyswtstasRATSFGJCGSAQRESADFGJKLLOGEWJLPCSDYVSTUHTDYDPJPOTTATOFSFSGLNLVXSSTCKBCSCGIJTEGYDGDDXHCUFJGIHLBHXWEASELBEOKGXFSTXVJVJVFSYDJVLPOTTERJCJFHDYDCBLHOTYDCDRACONCXHDDLJLGTSTANASTASIAGFUCDYHIGUSX oh look weird noises ): Well I have to go make more noises until this story updates :|
Oh my gosh. I adore this story already. The characters are funny and very in-depth already, they seem so real! I love Elsie, she reminds me of me, because I wear two different socks all the time. I never wear matching socks. Elsie = my new hero. I like the light, bubbly feeling of the chapter, and how you set things up without making it boring. It catches the eye and keeps me reading. :D You do need to watch your tenses, though. There were a few present-tense lines throughout.
Overall, good job! I'll comment the second one tomorrow. :)
Oooh, I like the update! Love the way she introduces The Russian Princess to everyone. Your OC is quite adorable and hilarious. ACK, HARREH POTTAH IS GONNAH ASK HERS A FAVORR. Feel better!
Oooooh, I like this! I think the 'Oooooh' was a little dramatic, neh? Anyways...I love all of your OC's! They're adorable. :) I cannot wait to see where this goes. :) Well written too!
December 5th, 2010 at 11:20pm
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