The Night - Comments

wow, I LOVE this! I love Carcillo and Bruce Springsteen :)

i found your one shot on kitas mibba,
and can i just say, you are extremely talented.
i loved it.
<3

Heh.

HEH.

You know I'm not a fan of the Flyers, but you also know that I make an exception for mah man Danny boy here, simply because he has my faaavorite #13. (It doesn't hurt that he's a hotttttay.)

And hellllooooo? MECHANIC?? Hot.

So, Danny Carcillo AS A MECHANIC? Gawd, I can't even comprehend the hotness.

THEN, you had to throw in the part about him drag racing, which about killed me. COULD HE GET ANY HOTTER?

Oh wait, yes he can, because he's also A SUPER NICE GUY. Like, whut? I need to go hose myself down. Too much hotness.

I thought it was really sweet how they got together too, with her coming out to see him perform and him being all excited to see her....(Hm. Why does THAT sound familiar...?) Heh.

Not to mention the "Hey, wear my clothes while I lift these heavy tires and flex my musclesss," stuff. Gawd.

You, my dear, are a shoe in. =)

This was so good! I love how you incorporated the song and described everything perfectly. Great job! Good luck in the contest!

And just a quick question about the layout. How did you get the pattern on the side? It looks really good!

Can I just start off by saying that they way you write is simply so amazing? Every story of yours I read, I feel myself feeling what the characters are feeling. You just have such a way with words.
I loved everything about this. You did such a good job.
Good luck in the contest! <3

Can I just say I can't wait for this? Because I can't! Unlike alot of people on here, I love Dan Carcillo, and Carcillo and Springsteen might be one of the best combinations you vould think of ;D

Good luck writing!