I only read the first chapter, but it's alright. There are a few error's, but you know, it doesn't really matter all too much I love Mikey in this story, he seems hyper xDDDDD
Slap ass fight!! Dude! Yay for Gerard!! I want to kiss* Mikey....hes a sexy evil genious!!!!!!! I still say he likes Frank or somethin... I might be wrong though. *will they ever kiss?! I know it's early and all, but it's so cute!!!!
Loved the update. I like picturing Frank and Gerard playing baseball. It's quite amusing. Sorry about your shitty day. That really sucks. I hope it gets better. Anyway, so I love this and I want more. Update soon. <3