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  • gudsfrid

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    Ahem, so it started off as me being in desperate need for a John Ohh story. So I clickity click on this story and end up reading the entire thing in less than an hour. Needless to say, it pretty much flipping rocked my socks off. I can really relate to Devon which is, most of the time, hard to do with main characters. I also really like this John, haha he's so damn adorable. But basically, this story needs to be updated soon because I said so. hehe I'm kidding but seriously, the wait is extremely irritating. So please please please, update! I'll be waiting!!hehehe....hehe(sorry, too much?)
    May 17th, 2012 at 07:35am
  • Supersonicskyline

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    im in love with this story! cant wait for another update :) xxx
    March 1st, 2012 at 12:53am
  • Oh.My.Merah! O_o

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    I really do like this story. Update Please !
    January 2nd, 2012 at 08:23pm
  • tessie

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    UPDATE PLEASEEEE! I seriously read the whole thing today and SERIOUSLY wish you'd update :)
    I beggeth you to update :P
    November 30th, 2011 at 11:25pm
  • Caitosaur.

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    AHHHHHHHHH!
    So I've caught up now. It's so good and I say this far too much but it's still true:
    "I want to lock you in my basement and have my way with you. And by 'have my way with you' I mean give you a laptop and kittens for endless inspiration and have you write for me forever."

    Also. The Polyvore things started working. Maybe it was just the first couple chapters. I'm not sure because I stopped trying.
    Also. In chapter 15 you had:
    “So, how do pi[you feel about him?”
    which clearly can't be right.
    November 25th, 2011 at 10:53am
  • Caitosaur.

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    Dear Darling.
    I've just started reading this and am on chapter nine, but the real news here is that at the end of every chapter there's a polyvore link and every time I click it links me to a page that does not exist.
    which makes me sad.

    "thought you ought to know" *swoons*
    November 25th, 2011 at 10:03am
  • maddizzlle

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    i love this story! update please! :) i cant get enough of it!
    September 5th, 2011 at 09:17am
  • becauseiamfree

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    such an amazing story :3
    i started and finished it all in a day xP
    hope you update soon :D
    <3
    July 10th, 2011 at 10:55pm
  • xxblackxxrosesxx

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    i love your story, could you please update soon :) <3
    April 29th, 2011 at 12:12am
  • lemelime394

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    I saw this story on one of BUSTANTS (sp?)s stories, and and decided to read it! SUch an awesome story! The plot is great, as well as the characters SO GOOD! i can't want for an update (: (:
    April 3rd, 2011 at 06:27am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    :]
    March 31st, 2011 at 02:52am
  • liar's lane.

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    I got so excited when I saw this was updated.
    I HOPE this means that they'll finally be together bt Devon seems pretty set on them not....I hope she's wrong! God I love this story.
    March 22nd, 2011 at 06:52am
  • raja sahara

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    this is brilliaaaaaaaaant :) UPDATE.
    March 20th, 2011 at 07:48pm
  • littlemisslonely

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    I vote Science & Faith. :)
    March 20th, 2011 at 07:11pm
  • whilethefirewasout

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    John and Devon need to get it on! They know they both want it!
    March 20th, 2011 at 07:09pm
  • imXstillXfalling6

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    love this story
    March 8th, 2011 at 05:44am
  • pouring.rain.

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    Pleeeeease update! This story gives me something to look forward to (:
    February 28th, 2011 at 02:21am
  • littlemisslonely

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    That's gotta suck for John. He finally gets up the nerve to kiss and and she turns him down. Twice. :(
    February 28th, 2011 at 01:45am
  • witch.

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    a-HAHA.
    Despite the "haha"'s, that was in distress, not amusment.
    Why am I in distress, you may ask?
    *sniffle* Because my boyfriend died two years ago and I'm going madly suicidal over it.
    ...
    Just kidding. xD
    No, I'm in distress my friend, because there is only fourteen chapters.
    And, you see, I've read exactly fourteen of them. Which suggests I've read them all.
    And that, dear, is not good.
    The only way to... ahem- fix- this problem is to, well...
    You know.
    Oh dear, do I really have to say it?
    You'd think this exxageratingly long comment would give it away, but uhm-
    Update? Darling? Please?
    That almost-kiss was almost too utterly amazing to bear.
    This is definately one of the best stories I've read in a long time.
    February 24th, 2011 at 11:45pm
  • AlmostLovelyDisaster

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    wow this chapter was just wow, i loved it! Devon is so odd, i wonder what she hasnt told John yet?
    February 24th, 2011 at 06:57am
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