Make Me Scream - Comments

  • kendra-rae

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    Love it <3 cannot wait for more :)
    March 21st, 2013 at 04:12am
  • neon.band.aids.

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    Oh geez, I can just imagine the tabloids. Patrick is really funny. Smartass. I can't wait for more!
    March 20th, 2013 at 08:25pm
  • neon.band.aids.

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    Oh gosh. I'm scared of a love triangle. I hope she tell her mom to go to hell. Please update again soon!
    March 18th, 2013 at 12:15am
  • slumflower

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    I hope she doesn't end up falling for Kane! That's like Jon's best guy friend ;(
    Jon needs to tell Mandy, ditch her, and finish what they started! Can't wait to see what happens next when she wakes up at Patrick's place :)
    March 17th, 2013 at 01:34pm
  • Hawkchick85

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    well I'm glad she didn't go to jail, but she needs to ditch her mom that's for sure. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS
    February 27th, 2013 at 06:12am
  • kendra-rae

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    Love it <3
    February 27th, 2013 at 04:02am
  • jazter

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    drinking and driving? Bad idea, girly!
    February 24th, 2013 at 03:03pm
  • Red The Small

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    Please update. I'm in need of some Toews time. ;) They really need to get together and Mandy can fall into a deep hole and never return >:)
    But anyway, love it. <3
    February 24th, 2013 at 06:32am
  • kendra-rae

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    So didn't want them to stop! Jonathan should of been like girlfriend who? Haha they need to be together like ASAP!
    Love it <3
    February 22nd, 2013 at 04:38am
  • Hawkchick85

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    His girlfriend needs to go and fast, they are so perfect for each other. I love this and I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS
    February 22nd, 2013 at 04:27am
  • alwaysadreamer

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    Ugh can we get rid of Jonny's girlfriend or...? He needs to make Aislynn scream. (I've literally been thinking that the entire story.)
    February 21st, 2013 at 06:29am
  • kendra-rae

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    Love it <3 cannot wait for more :)
    February 17th, 2013 at 03:37am
  • Hawkchick85

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    I love this!!! I love the way Ash and Jon talk to each other, I really don't like Mandy, I have a feeling that she's going to cause a lot of problem and really quickly. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS
    February 16th, 2013 at 11:57pm
  • laurenk24

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    I love this story and can't wait to see what comes next! Btw I loved ur teaser :)
    February 14th, 2013 at 01:34pm
  • Hawkchick85

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    I love this I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I feel a bit bad for Maggie getting left like that, but I can't wait to see hoe the rest of the party goes. PMS
    February 14th, 2013 at 05:51am
  • laurenk24

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    i love this story!
    February 11th, 2013 at 01:02am
  • Fairart

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    I really like where this is going.
    February 10th, 2013 at 04:15pm
  • Hawkchick85

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    I just found this and I really love it. I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. PMS
    February 10th, 2013 at 09:23am
  • Laz-19.87.25

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    I love this story! Cant wait to see what will happen. update soon please???
    Great work keep it up!
    December 3rd, 2010 at 11:41pm
  • RosiePosie08

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    Love the update honey. Kaner is soo funny
    December 3rd, 2010 at 09:12pm