Wowww.. chapter 2 is only half of an actual chapter? It was pretty long. And that Richard guy sounds like a very hot dick, haha. And the boss reminds of what J. Jonah Jameson from the Spider-man series and Daily Bugle newspaper would be like in real life. But no Tom Keifer yet? :( But it still rocks!! Keep it up! :D And i failed to comment first time around that your story layout is really pretty. ;)
Wow Rhea, this story is amazing and exactly what I've been looking for since... oh I can't even remember! You're right, it's nothing like the other fan-fics. It's smart. It's real. It's epic!!! Please continue :)
This was actually very good! Your writing style is so neat! And it's a very different take on "fan-fiction" that i am used to seeing. You should definitely continue this, i like it. I am curious to see how your take on different artists is like. A possible chapter on Tom Keifer would be epic and would be very informative taking that you admire him and I don't know a lot of him. :D update, update! haha :D