Muse. - Comments

I really hope you continue this story, it's very good.

I miss this story

I really wish you wouldn't have stopped writing this. I don't know if you'll ever see this, but you have the most beautiful writing style I've ever read. Its inspired me to start writing again.

Where'd you go? :( I hope you update soon! :)

Wow.im kinda hooked on this story.
I get confused every once in a while, but i think thats how you are meaning to right it?
Anywayssss, cant wait to read more.(:

i love how ryan just puts everything into perspective so eloquently :)

I hope you update soon! <3

I just managed to get caught up on the updates for this (I've still not internet at the new house but I'm crashing at a friend's place right now so I have internet for a day or two) and I must say, I've missed your writing so much. You really are one of my favorite authors and I can't wait until I can buy a book of yours from a shop =3

The chapters are so heartbroken and sorrow filled but in a way joyful because of they're still kind of going (kind of) strong together. And the way Brendon is stuck to her side whilst she's still unconscious is probably the most beautiful thing ever.

I love you writing so much, I can't wait until I can get back the internet and find loads more updates

I'm so sorry about your grandpa. *hugs* I think you wrote a beautiful chapter. I didn't feel like the mood should have been 'hopeful' or anything (not just yet), it just seems right that Brendon is truly confused with what to do with all the things that were found and what to do/say next.

And you're right -- loving someone IS better than any cure. Brendon's love can be the cure for Sarah.

Thank you for writing and posting still, even with the loss of your grandpa.

I'm so glad this is back. And I totally get what Ryan's saying, but I can also see it from Brendon's side. I'm really curious to see what Brendon says/does now.

Once again, I am in love.
Thank you for making me fall in love.

Chapter 58: I just have to say...I love the way Ryan just flat out told Brendon that he's being selfish. He has a point about Quinn. Just because she isn't "Sarah" anymore, that doesn't mean she's not essentially the same person that Brendon is trying so hard to bring back to life so to speak. "And this feeling, its like waking from a coma, realizing that you might have been safe in your sleep but life is too important to trade for a dream." I absolutely love this line. And this chapter did feel like it was an important part of the story. Almost like some sort of turning point for all the characters...

Hooray! New update!

Chapter 56: I'm not even going to lie, I got a little depressed when I read that the garden was empty and that the tree was pulled out of the ground. Poor Quinn(/Sarah). Harvey...that name makes me feel like I have forgotten some sort of detail from earlier in the story. Hmm... I love how Brendon's excitement of getting to look into Sarah's life just kind of jumps off the page at you. I actually kind of got really giddy myself. Ha.

On a side note...I personally was very impressed by Vices & Virtues. I fell in love with the album the very first time I heard it. I did catch myself comparing Brendon's writing to Ryan's writing, but I suppose that was to be expected. The best thing about the album was that it was an entirely new sound, but at the same time, it still felt like Panic! At The Disco. That's mostly what I was worried about with the new album. I was kind of afraid that they wouldn't sound like them anymore, if that makes any sense. Right...back to the story.

Chapter 57: OK, firstly, I need to say that I absolutely love how this chapter was written. Something about that repeated line at the end...just kind of tied the chapter together somehow. Anyway...I feel horrible for Quinn/Sarah and her past...and the thought of her getting 'locked up.' However, Brendon is right. She does need to try to get better. And I love how Brendon is kind of pushing the idea of her being Sarah onto her again. Like...he's trying to make her realize that just because bad things happened in the past, it doesn't mean that she needs to let those things haunt her. And I think he's almost subconsciously trying to say, 'Hey...I figured out what you were hiding, I know what happened and I'm still here. I still love you. That should be enough.' I don't know...just a thought/opinion.

Can't wait for the next update! I'm really glad you're writing this again. This is one of the most well written stories I have ever read, and it's done in a very unique style. Personally, I think the way you write this is one of the most difficult styles of writing to pull off, just because it's kind of...unorganized in an organized, thought out way. So...yeah =) This is a really long comment.

Once again, amazing.

I'm leaping out of my seat, just knowing you're updating once again!!! <3

Loved the update, as usual. I can't wait to see what happens next! HURRY UP! Just kidding! You're awesome with updating quickly. :)

I do love this story and I'm insanely happy you're still going with it!
I love that song, also. c:

Finally! An update! (you sound like me being gone from mibba for so long! haha) Glad you're back! Great updates! I can't wait for more!

I'm so glad you're back and wow, they found a lot! This story is still so interesting to me. Can't wait til you update more! :)

Okay so my friend showed me this only because I'm a big Harry Potter fan and she thought I'd find the bit where Ryan mentions it to be amusing. That's all I came on here to see. Just that one part. But I started reading it from the beginning and I am absolutely hooked. I love your style of writing, this idea. Everything. Keep up the AH-MAZING work. c: