Oh Amelia - Comments

I love the update so much! Its one of those chapters that got you mixed feelings...

You may not know what you are doing, but I like it.

I feel like Amelia is one of those people who need to hit the rock bottom in order to get up, fortunately John is there to help her realize that she needs to be clean and revaluate her life (not only for them to maybe have a future, but mostly for herself).

I love this story so much and i was so happy to see an update in my subscriptions! I love Amelia and John, but they've both got a lot to figure out before anything can really happen between the two of them. I feel bad for her, but I also think that if she gets the help she needs, and let's John help her too, they could be really great for each other and she could finally heal. Great job, and keep updating! (:

JOHN, GO BACK TO HER HOUSE BECAUSE SHE IS IN TROUBLE!!

For real though, Amelia needs some serious help...like rehab, counseling, etc. She'll never get it thought if she doesn't admit she has a problem. She needs a wake-up call (and it sounds like that may be coming in the next chapter). Hopefully John will help her and be there with her through it all.

I love this chapter. I first started reading because I thought it would be nice to read a fanfic whose character share the same name as me but then I realize I really love the way you think of the story. This chapter captures the missing feelings from John and Amelia, though I would personally prefer to read something more conflicting to Amelia's side of the story and John's incapability to break through her in the moment.. But then again, I love this chapter :-)

I really, really love this story so far. I love the way you write, and the beginning of this story was heartbreaking because of Andrew, and as the chapters go on, it still is because of how Amelia is coping with Andrew's death. I feel awful for John because he's just trying to help Amelia and be there for her, and hopefully she'll realize that soon. Great job! Can't wait to read more soon!

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What an outburst... I'm glad John knows, but now he has to do something about it. I'd like to read a chapter from his point of view.

Also, some constructive criticism: could you write longer chapters? I feel that I'm reading from the surface, you know? I miss a fuller description of emotions, the characters and what's going on. But don't get me wrong, you have an original plot going on and a bright future for this story :)

John needs to find out about her drugs or else her life is going to go even more downhill...and quickly. I mean, she could lose her job. I feel so sorry for her, but she also needs to help herself.

oh my god! you're writing again!!!!! im going to start reading ahhhhh

Oh, fuck. Cocaine is trouble and hell difficult to abandon. Oh, Amelia... I think John has to find out, but I have the feeling someone will only find out when she gets in the verge of an overdose.

Althought I don't like to think about a world where Andrew doesn't exist, I like this story. Interesting approach of "not popular" drugs like pills to get you through the day, they seem harmless, but they are dangerous.

That was definitely a plot twist I didn't see coming. I'm so sad that she feels she has to take drugs to get by and she has definitely started to put herself in danger. I hope someone realizes soon what she's doing so they can stop her before it gets too bad.

My heart is breaking for Amelia because she and Andrew seems perfect (and that was only after one chapter so the rest of the flashbacks are going to kill me haha).

I can't imagine quitting my job and moving away like Amelia did. I think it was good for her and will help her get some closure, but that is so much change in a short amount of time. She's going to need someone to be there for her and help her through everything - someone like John ha.

So glad you're back! Can't wait to see where this goes.

i looove it, please write more

Sooo its been a longtime till u updated on this sorry but PLEASE. update i wanna know what happens

i love the story!! update omg :3

New subscriber!!! Love this story!!!! I think she's pregnant:)

i like the fact that andrew finally gets a story, and i like this story.

I love this story. I'm a sucker for stories about best friends falling in love with each other... I'm sure you've already noticed that though hahaha. But... a baby?! That would be so cute!