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  • Starbabyekj

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    This story is really good. Please update soon!
    November 27th, 2011 at 11:24pm
  • cat-vengeance

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    i lovee this sooo much <3
    cant wait for the next update.
    March 13th, 2011 at 09:29am
  • Liz Mayhem

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    I loves it!

    Anddd I think you should do cinderella!
    March 13th, 2011 at 03:02am
  • the-quiet-one

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    Oh and forgot to ask soemthing. They didn't show much of the band, more of the places travelled and the crowds of kids and adults gathered around a barricade, sometimes sosme captions to follow under them. -> uh, no clue what you mean with this word
    March 12th, 2011 at 08:43pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Oha, I really wonder who that guy at the door is
    Hm, and then they have this illegal book....and Nikki stole it?
    And the last time she read it Rose dissapeared....so why is she reading it again...
    This is probably going to be trouble
    Oh and as for the next fairytale one....can I suggest two other ones?
    Maybe Little Red Riding Hood, just not being dramatic at the end
    Or The Little Mermaid, also not being dramatic at the end (idk if you would make it work) :)
    Can't wait for more
    Hope you update soon :)
    March 12th, 2011 at 08:41pm
  • Pansy.licious

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    :] I think you should do "briar rose" the more adult version sleeping beauty is based off of.
    March 12th, 2011 at 06:46am
  • SurfSkittles

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    you can't leave us with a cliffhanger like thaaaaaat!!!!!! who is the guy? surely she woudnt open the door if it was one of the kings. hmmmmmmmmmmmm. i hope you update again soon!
    March 12th, 2011 at 06:34am
  • loveisfortheliars

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    I think you should do Cinderella :) it's my second fav after beauty and the beast
    March 12th, 2011 at 05:21am
  • BeauteousBeth

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    Ooo! Mystery man!!! Dun dun dun! For your question my dear I would say Cinderella! (:
    March 12th, 2011 at 04:35am
  • justhannah;

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    Loved the update!
    That cliffhanger though... -.-
    March 12th, 2011 at 02:45am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Great update..I wonder whose at the door?? I like cindrella to be the next princess series :)
    March 12th, 2011 at 02:28am
  • BeauteousBeth

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    Goodness! Glad you put some background on this whole demon thing, I loved it. And Pepsi is the besttt!!! (:
    March 11th, 2011 at 09:55pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    And I forgot in my previous comment that there were a few minor mistakes I saw.
    The was her lips pursed into a pout was enough to turn me on. -> I gues in this context you mean way

    The scent of the make confirmed it to be Syn. -> I don't know, should it have been male. If not, ignore this.
    March 11th, 2011 at 12:03pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    Oha, so Rose isn't really with them
    And not only that, she is(was) her best friend
    Zacky seems to have taken quite the interest in Nikki though
    I doubt that he'll go easy on her
    Can't wait for more
    Hope you update soon :)
    March 11th, 2011 at 11:54am
  • Pansy.licious

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    YAY UPDATE! :]
    i love it, is our main girl gonna "get around" like her demonic bestie without testies? [sorry I like saying that lol]

    aslo; I am also craving gummy bears since you mentioned it, and I am ever so lucky cause my brother went out and bought some and now I shall go do my thieving

    update again soon!
    March 11th, 2011 at 07:13am
  • justhannah;

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    I agree ^
    loved it.
    March 11th, 2011 at 06:12am
  • SurfSkittles

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    hmmmmm so rose isn't officially with any of them? and she used to be her best friend. verrrrry interesting!
    March 11th, 2011 at 06:03am
  • XtremeFairy

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    This story amazing..I just found it :)
    I cant wait for more soon
    March 11th, 2011 at 05:50am
  • cat-vengeance

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    i like this alot :D
    i cant wait till the next chap
    March 11th, 2011 at 05:08am
  • SurfSkittles

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    i'm SO glad you updated this!!!!!!!! i absolutely love it and hope you get around to updating it more often =)
    March 9th, 2011 at 09:03pm
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