First off, you need to update this or im going to go insane. second, i think she should have some sort of complete breakdown and try to kill herself and make zacky realize finally how much pain he's put her through. he needs to figure it out some time and start trying to make it all up to her. right now hes just being a selfish dick and its pissing me off.
In love with this story I really cant wait to see how it all turns out to end not sayin i want it to end but I know all good stories have to end at some point...cant wait for more! :D
so, I am going to tell you how long it took me to read this & the prequel like some ladies before me have..haha..it took me like two days to read the prequel because of school & whatnot, but I have read this in about two hours or so...and I am completely hooked.(: & Zacky and Starr should deffinately be together. What can I say? I'm a sucker for happy and somewhat happy endings, I mean I realize that you could make it to where they are together, but make it a sad ending, but still..(:
It's 04:34 AM. I spent 12+ hours reading the prequel & this! Why? Because they are amazing! I love the way you develop the characters & I'm completely hooked with this story! You're a fantastic writer & I love the bond Zacky & Starr have!!! Keep it up!!!!
I read this all within a 24-hour period. This story hooked me in the beginning and has kept me with her struggle. There should be some sort of compromise, something that breaks Zacky so he realises exactly what he's put her through, and then and ONLY then will she be back with him like they were in the beginning. (And I don't mean having starr cheat on him I mean something that endangers her life so he comes to his senses?) Anyways, amazing story :) Keep it up :) I look forwards to another update as soon as you get one up!
Ok... I'm gonna be honest! I haven't read a single chp of ths story because I just started reading the prequel!!! & if this is as good as 'Nightmare' is... then I'm gonna be very happy!!!!
absolutely loved it!! amazing!! I'm back from my weekend away but I still have one more show tmrw and a mCR show on thurs. :0) So hopefully I can update soon!!!
she deserves a happy ending but zacky doesnt deserve to be let off the hook either for all the things that he's done to her just because he bes nice to her here and their he still hurt her multiple times it would be so nice to see her at least have the happy ending even if she finds it with someone else or if it ends with zacky proving he's sorry n they are working on it as being just friends but he really shouldnt be let off the hook she has every right to feel how she is i just want to see her happy even if she's not with zack
Skylar can go away :| He's sweet an' all, but he's making Starr confused. That ain't good lol And yay! I'm happy that you've updated again! Please update again soon xD x
Now I'm all caught up with the most recent chapter and wow is all I can say!!! Oh how zacky has changed and he had to go and cheat again,really now just couldn't keep it in his pants for too long now could he geez!!! Absolutely amazing!!!! Update soon!!!!