Assault Party - Comments

AllTimeLizz (100)

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COMMENT PRIZE #2: This was amazing I love how you decided to start the story before and during the begining of the BL/ind. age... It was an amazing idea, and a well written one at that. You have a vocabulary that shocks me... It's a mazing and uses words i have to look up. It would be amazing if you wrote a sequal or spin-off oif this story. I would definatly support it.

March 16th, 2011 at 07:37am

Twisted Romance (100)

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Write more!!! I like her attitude when she gets off of the pills haha

January 30th, 2011 at 08:52pm

Maille Makeout (100)

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Haha, MCR getting called hippies.....priceless. I love it, keep updating! You got talent! Word!

January 27th, 2011 at 07:01pm

Vintage Trouble. (100)

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Not the pills! I'm guessing this will turn out bad? I hope the killjoys will help! :D

January 9th, 2011 at 08:57pm

Vintage Trouble. (100)

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Wow, that was a very descriptive chapter. Well done! I don't know why this story hasn't got more comments then it should have.
Perfect Chaos,
Signing out. :)

December 20th, 2010 at 06:06pm

Vintage Trouble. (100)

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Wow, that was scary! I hope the world doesn't end like that! More soon please :)

December 13th, 2010 at 06:23pm

Red-Lips-Like-Razors (100)

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That was heartbreaking, poor kid :(

December 6th, 2010 at 03:33am