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  • shortygirl

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    I just found this. I really like it. But it seems you've been gone for awhile.
    November 2nd, 2016 at 05:51pm
  • shortygirl

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    I just found this. I really like it. But it seems you've been gone for awhile.
    November 2nd, 2016 at 05:51pm
  • ambeymaree

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    Fixed.
    Thank you!
    February 26th, 2014 at 06:49pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    Also, the plural of wolf is not wolfs, it's wolves.
    February 26th, 2014 at 06:45pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    You've misspelled rogue in the summary. I'm only letting you know because the word you have there is rouge, which means a powder used to redden cheeks.
    February 26th, 2014 at 06:44pm
  • a venom

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    great update
    December 28th, 2013 at 04:21am
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    loved the update
    wonder what's going to happen next
    April 22nd, 2013 at 07:17am
  • madi220

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    Aww I love this story! You have to write more.
    March 30th, 2013 at 07:18pm
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    great update
    can't wait for more
    July 10th, 2012 at 10:30pm
  • Star Angel

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    love this please udpate soon like nowish lol
    June 26th, 2012 at 09:59am
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    loved the update Smile
    can't wait for more
    May 26th, 2012 at 12:05am
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    loved the update
    can't wait for the next one
    May 17th, 2012 at 11:10pm
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    loved the update
    wonder what's going to happen in the next one
    January 10th, 2012 at 06:57am
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    Can't wait for more
    October 23rd, 2011 at 06:15am
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    loved it
    September 14th, 2011 at 11:17pm
  • Burgerat20

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    wooo keep going!!
    September 14th, 2011 at 01:54pm
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    loved the update
    can't wait for more
    August 13th, 2011 at 05:23pm
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    great update
    May 28th, 2011 at 03:59am
  • Burgerat20

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    oh my gosh keep going please
    May 27th, 2011 at 04:46pm
  • Burgerat20

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    yes!!
    May 5th, 2011 at 09:53pm
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