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  • The Rev's Fiction

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    Aww this story is so cute! Mr. Green
    February 6th, 2015 at 07:01am
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    Aw, Jimmy is so sweet. Lol, Johnny in tighty whity's! XD
    I loved the chapter, Please update soon!
    December 22nd, 2010 at 05:56pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    lol jimmy so funny how he tried to find way for her to stay home with him instead of going to work.
    Amazing update :D
    December 22nd, 2010 at 04:53pm
  • britahnee

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    *Claps My Hands* haha
    great chapter, as always.
    The next one should be interesting..can't wait!!
    December 22nd, 2010 at 03:11pm
  • little-miss-strange

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    Fuck, sorry it took me so long to read this, but I thought it was brilliant.
    Jimmy & Keely are a really cute couple, and what's awesome is that they finally have a chance to be happy together. I mean, there's the tour coming up, so that's gonna be really hard, but at least they have this time together & it's especially nice to see Keely feeling so comfortable with him.
    And it's so cute how Jimmy said he lost his teddy bear! LOL, I can see how Keely couldn't deny him, because that would be as adorable as it fucking gets.
    Gah, it's just so sweet! You can tell they really do love each. :)
    Man, I can't fucking wait for more of this! This story and your writing are both magnificent. <3
    December 13th, 2010 at 09:04am
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    Aw, Jimmy is so sweet! :P
    I loved the chapter.
    Please update soon.
    December 12th, 2010 at 05:30pm
  • XtremeFairy

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    Awe this was a cute chapter :D
    December 12th, 2010 at 07:20am
  • Zacky's Beotch

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    :) awesome possum update dude. I loved it. you're a very good writer.
    December 12th, 2010 at 03:10am
  • little-miss-strange

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    I can already tell this is going to be as badass as Vile World.
    Seriously, I love your style of writing! It's obvious that you put a lot of effort into setting up the scenes and giving your characters believable personalities, which I find totally awesome, because not a lot of writers pay such close attention to detail. It makes this so much fun to read!
    That, and the fact that Jimmy and Keely are the cutest couple ever.
    And LOL @ Jimmy being such a horny bastard! I straight up laughed my ass off when Scarlet cock-blocked him, hahaha. Oh, and when he broke the coffee table!
    Haha, basically, this story is amazing and I really look forward to more of it.
    It's as addicting as Synyster Gates!
    Heh, but seriously, it's great. I'm subscribing. :]
    December 7th, 2010 at 08:29am
  • Zacky's Beotch

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    leave it to Jimmy to break something :P lol
    December 7th, 2010 at 12:22am
  • XtremeFairy

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    haha Jimmy so cute..I can't believe he broke the glass coffee table.
    Amazing update :D
    December 6th, 2010 at 08:42pm
  • ComicBookKiller

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    Of course I've subscribed. This story is brilliant. You're brillaint!
    December 6th, 2010 at 02:29pm
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    Rofl, Jimmy fell threw the table. XD
    I loved the chapter. I'm in love with this story.
    Please update soon.
    December 6th, 2010 at 01:03pm
  • HotelBellaMuerte.

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    Jimmy <3
    Such a horndog and yet he's still amazing.
    Loved it ^-^
    December 6th, 2010 at 12:09pm
  • Somehow.Saving.You

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    Hey, awesome chapter, I'm glad we know her story and that she's talking, it's a great sign.
    More soon
    xXx
    December 6th, 2010 at 06:59am
  • britahnee

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    Jimmy is a horndog but a very hot horndog c[x
    one of my favorite stories so far;<3
    December 6th, 2010 at 03:40am
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    I really liked the first chapter.
    You have an AMAZING plotline already and I'm exited for the next chapter.
    Please update soon.
    December 6th, 2010 at 12:51am
  • britahnee

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    great start to the sequel;
    addicted to it already (:
    December 6th, 2010 at 12:20am
  • Zacky's Beotch

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    I must say that I have to agree with HotelBellaMuerte. (my Twinny^-^) you're an amazing writer and the first chapter is really quite good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
    December 5th, 2010 at 11:50pm
  • HotelBellaMuerte.

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    I'm already loving this just as much as Vile World.
    I love your style of writing, it really lets you into the character's mind and I like that.
    December 5th, 2010 at 10:53pm