Fuck, sorry it took me so long to read this, but I thought it was brilliant. Jimmy & Keely are a really cute couple, and what's awesome is that they finally have a chance to be happy together. I mean, there's the tour coming up, so that's gonna be really hard, but at least they have this time together & it's especially nice to see Keely feeling so comfortable with him. And it's so cute how Jimmy said he lost his teddy bear! LOL, I can see how Keely couldn't deny him, because that would be as adorable as it fucking gets. Gah, it's just so sweet! You can tell they really do love each. :) Man, I can't fucking wait for more of this! This story and your writing are both magnificent. <3
I can already tell this is going to be as badass as Vile World. Seriously, I love your style of writing! It's obvious that you put a lot of effort into setting up the scenes and giving your characters believable personalities, which I find totally awesome, because not a lot of writers pay such close attention to detail. It makes this so much fun to read! That, and the fact that Jimmy and Keely are the cutest couple ever. And LOL @ Jimmy being such a horny bastard! I straight up laughed my ass off when Scarlet cock-blocked him, hahaha. Oh, and when he broke the coffee table! Haha, basically, this story is amazing and I really look forward to more of it. It's as addicting as Synyster Gates! Heh, but seriously, it's great. I'm subscribing. :]
I must say that I have to agree with HotelBellaMuerte. (my Twinny^-^) you're an amazing writer and the first chapter is really quite good. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!