Let's All Kill Ourselves and Blame Society. - Comments

This was very well written. I loved how you repeated words like "And." and "Disgust". It made the story more interesting. The details were stunning; I couldn't find any grammar mistakes or punctuation mistakes and also, I loved your sentence structures.

You did an over-all great job and I even feel tears creeping up to my eyes. Honestly, her brother should have thought about the consequences for the people around them and how they would feel rather than just killing himself and leaving his family distraught.

Great job! A+

Bravo. Very-well written. Even if not all gays are like that I think it is the case in alot of situations. Homophobia is just ignorance and I think its wrong and shouldnt even exist.

This is sad, but it is one of the best I've read in a while.
I don"t know why, but truthfully while reading this I wanted to cry.

:( I have the strongest urge to just smother my brother && tell him how much I love him. I don't understand homophobia at all >:(

But this was amazing

I am so angry at you. Every story you write is sad ! Carolyn. Happy. Now. >:D I still love it though :3

I liked this. Your writing is really intellectual and thoughtful. I thought the story was really sad. But i enjoyed it.
But i disagree with allot of what your saying. I'm gay, and i'm happy. Not suicidal. Not bitter. But i do know that allot of gay/lesbian teenagers do have it pretty rough.

That's the great thing about literature, though. People dont have to agree with it, they can still disagree and enjoy.

This was good. I liked it a lot. The whole story kind of just blends c;