Haha, oh that was a great last line. Poor Jimmy- I wasn't sure about him at first, but he turned out to be an amazing friend. Francois too. I'm surprised that Sateen didn't feel more friendship towards Harry than she did. And WHERE was Hermione though all of this?
Several things on chapter 4- why would a dead woman lay her signature over a kill, what was the relevance of the muggles, and how did he know her name? I admit I got bored and skimmed some parts, but I couldn't make sense of it when I tried
Third paragraph, I believe, this sentence, "You int he effing, loving minf would mate with a freakin' Troll?" I mean, "Who in their". Sorry. There's other mistakes in my comment, but I'm just tired, and I can't find where to delete my comment and revise it. :/
Wow. Okay then. I'm only at Chapter 5, part 1, since I've been busy with everything else. Finals, my own story updates, plus I'm starting a new back ground story, and started a brand new story.
Anyways, Draco will definitely be the death of her, eh? xD All these attacks, man, it must suck. But. before this, he ended up like his father, in a way, and hates it. LoL. Pretty boy probably gets drop kicked by that thought every time. Heh. :p
Oooh. She still has this 'flesh necklace' of hers. Hmm, I wonder if Draco still have his, and he spotted her? O.o Will he go after her? Is he going after her!/ Oh my divines, I MUST KNOW!!!!!! :D So, back off to reading. Oh. And, I like Jimmy. ^w^ Pretty gay boy gets cookie from me. Teehee! *runs away, leaving a plate of cookies in your hands*
Mmmm. I like this chapter already. A sexified Sateen, and a scarred faced man? Oh *you. stop spoiling me. XD XD XD And his name is Pierre. How fitting. Heh. Damn. Sateen screamed Percy and I was thinking Jackson. Roflmsao. But he doesn't fit the description at all. Tsk, tsk. ooooh. . . *melts* Russian. . . *turns into a shivering puddle at your feet* Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! *my body puddle bubbles at the scene, me turning into a gaseous form from all the heat* But haha. Even with all his sexy Russian-ness, she still thinks of Draco. :D
.^. Draco shows up the club, AND JIMMY THINKS HIS A MUGGLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????!!!!!??? ASDFGHJKLASDFGHJKLASDFGHJKL!!!! No words for this. But seriously, trolls? You int he effing, loving mind would mate with a freakin' troll? *shudders* Ew. Trolls in this one game I play are uuuuuugly! Three eyes, and three claws, and they're cannibals. o.o *slinks away into darkness at this*
Oooooh. I'm loving the pictures for each chapter, by the way. How do you do it? I try to, and I fail, miserably. :c
P.s. I will stop here, part seven, or the real chapter 6, and continue tomorrow. I hope you enjoyed this comment. :3
Awesomeness. I say no more. Well, actually......I can't just up yet I can't believe Jimmy sacrificed himself for her! But then again, he gets to be with Francois =) Draco + Sateen =D Scorpius AND twins! adorable! Loved it!<3
O_O its...over? NOOOOOOOOOO!!! This story was completely amazing and itsgoing to be horrible not seeingit in my subscription list. The ending was brilliant and Im glad that after all this time they finally got their happy ending!
Great story and ending but it was still oh so sad. I absolutely love how they told Pansy off though hahaha. I will continue to read your stories and maybe a second generation one of this would be good, I know I'll read it.