Where The Lines Overlap - Comments

Keep goign :)

I don't think you should make William a vampire. Maybe something supernatural, but I think a vampire might take away from the story a bit. Great story btw. I am really interested in what she is going to do next.

OMG!!!
I want to see who
see ends up with,
so bad!!!
Update soon and I'll be happy =)

New reader and I'm already addictited.
Designer Vampire xx:D

Meaner! Update I love darren but hate the ass hole so kill him lol update please.

FINALLY ^O^ Gah, I can't stand William =.= I LIKE DARREN BETTER! =D

I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER !!!!!!!!!

Really great! What's wong with William? Hmm...maybe self infliction? Sex Addict in the most wrong way possible? Or something supernatural? Whatever it is, the story is really great. Waiting to read hte next chapter!

OMG!!! loved it keep going

No way i can describe how good that chapter was....AMAZING.... UPDATE SOONN PLEASE

Damn. You go girl <3

That chapter...was....wooooow! Hahaha...I don't know how to describe it! I liked it! :) Update soon please!

He sounds obsessive! Freaky! Ahaha I like it :)

KEEP GOING!!! I LOVE IT

It was really good!! I see a good story coming being writen :)

DO!!!!!!!!!!!! Its sounds soooo promsing!