Rise of the Black Rose Fairy - Comments

in looooooooooooooooooooove with this!

HAPPILY EVER AFTER!!!!!

AHHH Cute. I loved it. :D

Awwwh, cute, little kid love. No sex, no making out, no dirty stuff. I love you! It's amazing. and cute and ... just... awwwwh. :3 <3

Oh ha! My assumptions were correct! Zacky is the ladies man... i mean... guardian. xD I love that boy. ah he's so special. :P I love how he pops right in, nice work. You're making it so surreal to a fairy tale it's captivating. I really like this.

omg. XD BENJI AND JOEL? epic. Nice. Nice. Perfect trolls . ;P I love the interaction between Johnny and Rose, nicely done.

*cackles* I love Jimmy and shopping. XD I got the visual of the shop in my head and thought of something out of Harry Potter for a moment. Don't know why really. :P

I cant' wait to get to three. Brian was in this one! Guardian angel. ha. That boy. Is Zee the one for the ladies? He was always a ladies man... well is... *shuts up*. XD

Cute beginning! Sorry I did that awful thing with the challenge. :( I had a horrible time and well, doing anything for mibba in that time period just wasn't going to happen. I do hope you can forgive me. I feel horrible about that.

I really like the spin on this. You wrote it like a fairy tale, and I applaud you on the cute factor. It's "adorkable" if you know what I mean. (Which is good) I'm gonna continue reading. :D

Me love it... it's an Amazing short story:D

This was a really cute short story. I think you did a great job with it!

i loved this its so cute and sweet <3

Sorry missed updates>.<
Amazing her and Johnny are cute :D
Kidnapped part not so great:(
Yay Zacky :D

Awww, they're gonna get married! That's cute!

I love it :)

Yay for Zacky helping her! Haha. I liked the update and I'm lookin' forward to what's next!

Aww, she and Johnny are all cute. Haha. But uh-oh, she's been kidnapped!

I like this a lot so far. :)
Can't wait till the next one!

I thought that it was a cute second chapter. Glad he didn't call her Thumbelina, though. Haha. And I liked how you were able to get Brian into the story. I'm looking forward to seeing more.

I think that you're doing a good job with this. It's interesting to see a different spin on a classic fairytale.