This is overdue, but I just wanted to say this is one of my favorite stores! And I don't say that often! I feel like I could read this over and over. I usually prefer drama filled stories, but something about this just makes me melt. Their playful banter and flirtation you portray so well, and you can't but help be eager to watch their relationship grow!! As well as things such as how you portray the Staal family and their silliness... such a great job, love it!!!
Even though I'm nearly a year late commenting - wow. We'll just say my Christmas List just got a whole lot more demanding.
And once again, I was amazed by your story. This is seriously some of the best writing on Mibba. If hockey fanfics were published for sales, you'd be a bestseller. No joke.