Totally amazing. It had tons of feelings and emotions in it. "All tatty black hair, shy awkward smiles and those eyes...god, you would kill your own mother just to get a glimpse of those eyes. " < I am a sucker for eyes and a sucker for your writing and your description was amazing and of eyes so I love it! This must be the best oneshot ever talking about slash feelings but not slash action. Sorry if that made no sense. Totally amazing. I have a strange love for the background you have for this. Amazing writing as always, I can't believe something this good came out of your head a three in the morning.
*mumbles and pouts* That was...that was.....wow, words cant describe that. But i'll settle with that was fucking amazing How do you do this? How can you write like this? Can we switch brains or something? Please?
wow that was just wow it made my heart clench up there at the end when he said he never saw him again.. this was simply amazing riply i loved it it was so sad and touching. good job!!!
that was different, really interesting change of pace. I love how over such a short space your writing can convey so much, that is incredibly difficult to do but you do it so well! whats your secret? lol
i haven't read one story for ages and now I found this and I read it over and over again like 20 times :D it's so good!
good work ripley <3