The Sun Makes Shadows - Comments

I find this story very interesting. You have a great writing style! What Native American language are you using? I'm just curious because I've never seen these words used before even though I've read quite a few books on or using Native American languages.

“We stole this from the gnome and humpty dumpty over there to try and cheer Matt up but it didn’t work.”
I love this story I skipped work to read this story... I love it I just wish i found it sooner...

Hey another idea for a new name could be
[even if the stars are bright]

The darkness shines just like a light

Just thought i'd give you the idea :] it's cool if you stick with one of the two original ones you were thinking of using

matt has to have some kind of feelings for her if he was willing to risk his life to save her

ooooh. represssed memories?

moremoremoremormore cant wait

wonder if the other families have something to do with her nightmares

hmmm

more and i so cant wait for the next one i love lovelove this so freaking good

nice to see that matt is opening up and trying to move on just a little bit, i'm sure that once he gets his act right he'll be a very good father

They had a kid before her...?
If no one has offered to make you a banner yet, I could try. Just tell me what you want :) I'll go ahead and say I can't do much though :/

more moremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremoremore please

i wanna know what the hell happened in matt and val's past with their other kid, if she was killed i wanna know! man this story is just making me hyper

moremoremoremoremore and feel better please update soon

haha i love jim and zack. i was laughing the whole time they were in the closet and my mom walked by asking what i was laughing at. so i told her and she laughed too. so that's a major double bonus points for you my dear! my mommy never laughs at stuff like that lol.

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i liked the updates, matt is so freaking bipolar it's not even funny. poor girl is going to lose her mind.

Aww, poor Bella.
I loved the update!
Can't wait for the next update.

more more please

Great update!
Can't wait for more!