Im not gonna lie, i feel a little like you got b ored with it then tried to rush it to the end :( i know all grea things have to come to an end but yeah D;
Amazing story :) I'm actually happy that Serene got her happy ending..it might have not been with Matt as she planned it to be,but I'm glad she found that happiness with Oliver :) Now Matt finally realizes how much she really meant to him,but it's too late for that and now he can only watch from a far at the happy family that could have been his. I'm going to missing this story. Amazing work.
WLAN! Iwas so excited when I seen that you update! And garsh darn it! Matt needs to make up his mind. He can't have both girls. But anywhos update soon please!!.
:O what's gonna happen?! Is she gonna stay with Oliver? That was a bit selfish when he said he 'wanted her around' .. Matt confuses me D: Damn you Matt xD
oh my gosh! Brian's being a loser! ...but then again, it really does scare me that Matt is going to talk to Val alone. i certainly don't trust her either, not one bit ...i dunno... this is starting to worry me.
oh shizzles that was rude of Brian to say that but it seems like thats actually what Matts using Serene for and that would be sad if it true and just plain mean anywhos i like your story!
I just found this story and absolutely love it..it's amazing :D I have a feeling that she is going to believe Brian's words even though I want her to believe Matt. I really want Serene to have her happy ending..she's been through alot and I just want to see her happy. I can't wait for the next one.