Marry You - Comments

Thanks for commenting. This honestly wasn't my best story, but I'm thankful you liked it. ^_^

I loved the story it was greattt and sweet

Thanks for the comments. I truly wasn't sure how to take this story. I only posted it for the sake of their isn't a lot of Bruno Mars fan fics at all.
I promise to make another Bruno Mars fan fic better. Sorry that it wasn't too good >_<

This is good. But I think it would be better if you wrote their speech like this: “Well I know this little chapel on the boulevard we can go.” Giovanna said. That's all :)

I just took the comment virginity!! Haha.

Anyway, it wasn't as well written as it could have been, but who cares? It told a good story, and it was comprehensible, which is good enough for me. =]
And, you were saying this site lacks Bruno Mars fan fictions, and I completely agree. And the ones that are on here are all one shots. =[
Well, I am a HUGE Bruno fan, which, if you knew me, you'd be really surprised that I liked an artist that is so mainstream, since I am a passionate musician myself, and take music very seriously, and just don't consider a lot of the main stream musicians today as real artists, you know? But, Bruno is different. His music has a mix of a lot of different good genres in it. It's not just hip hop or R&B, you know. Plus, he's really passionate about his music, and is amazingly talented, unlike a lot of musicians today. I just love him. Haha. Anyway, since I love him so much, and I love writing about the men I love, I decided to start writing my own fan fiction of him. I started it a few days ago and already have a few chapters out, if you want to check it out.
Or, if you could spread the word to people who feel the same way as us (About there not being enough stories for him), that would be very much appreciated.

ANWAY! Thanks for posting this, and I hope to see the second part soon!