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  • aubs

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    I really loved the layout. It was simply beautiful.
    I liked how you bolded a few words -- they seemed more powerful when you bolded them.
    One more thing, I loved how the moment hasn't happened yet. I like how you wrote down something that would be the perfect moment for you.
    Overall, this was magnificent.
    January 1st, 2011 at 11:18pm
  • sleepingonthewaves

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    I agree this would also be my perfect concert experience :D
    Great one-shot.
    December 5th, 2010 at 06:56pm
  • breathless lullabies

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    Nice, one shot. :)

    That would be my perfect concert experience. xD
    December 5th, 2010 at 06:41pm
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