Take No Prisoners - Comments

I'm here from comment swap.
Firstly the title, very intriguing and the layout's good too. I don't why it matters to me so much but well. The writing is very good in all chapters that I've read and it is really awesome that multiple authors are working on a story and it doesn't lose its flow because I've seen it happen. I'm not a very big fan of the band but I did enjoy it. The voices of different characters is also very well made. I did found a few typos though but nothing major. Overall, you all are doing a good job. Keep it up. :)

I must say that the different authors in this story flow very well together! I honestly wouldn't have guessed that there was more than one person writing this, based on just reading the chapters alone. From chapter-to-chapter, the grammar stays impressive, which is very different than a lot of co-writes I see. I kind-of get tired of reading stories with chapters that sound like they're from two completely different people (which they are, if there's more than one author, but the point is to try and make your writing styles the same). I actually enjoyed reading this story a lot! The layout is gorgeous, as well. I love the photo you used for the banner, very hot (:

I absolutely love My Chemical Romance so I'm glad I've been sent here. As far as I've read, they haven't come in yet, but it's still a brilliant story nonetheless. You're a brilliant writer, the layout is just AMAZING and there were no mistakes that I picked up on. Good work.

This is pretty intense. I love the name, and how it is cowrite. But my only concern is the font, it is far to small for my eyes. But that is whom ever's decision if they want it that way. On another note, I love that it is a fanfiction about MyChem, and I am quite interested into it. I hope you all continue with this and update as soon a possible because this is what Mibba needs, lots of chapters and well written. This is amazingly done and I hope to see more of this in the future. :D

I saw the picture of my chemcial romance and i freaked out! I read the first line of your story and i love how you wrote it. I figured I'd write a comment now and during reading the first chapter.

i love it , i love love love it ! im a huge fan of mcr fan fictions !

Hellllo, I'm here via comment swap.
First off, WOW. This is extremely written for a story that has different authors. I'm definitely not that big of a fan of MCR fanfiction, but this is making me rethink that. This story is great, and the way it flows is just unbelievable. Keep it up c:

-Jess xx

I want to commend you all for being able to keep a story flowing with so many different authors. The styles are not so drastically different that if feels like a different story.
The story was very well written and although I am not very interested in the content (just personal preference) I was not able to continue reading. I wish you the best in finishing this story because fans of the genre will absolutely enjoy every word.

Honestly ... I just couldn't get into it. I'm sorry. ): It's not that it was bad - what I read was written very well - but it just couldn't capture my attention. That's not to say that it isn't good ; I'm sure it is! But it's but a matter of tastes and preferences and unfortunately this didn't match up to mine. I'm sorry! :( Good luck keeping this going, though! (:

This is such an amazing story! Keep up the good work. I love the way you describe the Dracs VS Killjoys as a war, I never really thought of it that way, it really switched things into perpective. The characters in this are so unique, and have so many layers. I love it! Update soon, I can't wait to read more!
XOXO
-B!

Holly I would have done it myself but I really didn't have time and I know the rest of you want to continue with your chapters so I didn't think it was fair for you lot to have to wait for me and Thanks for writing ity Kate its really good! xx

I offered? There was no point in waiting for another few weeks because she was really busy... x

So good, but I wish Ghosted had wrote :/
By the way Sunshine, that chapter was pretty brilliant! It's just Ghosted should also write, it's not fair that you have to do it for her
xxxx

Nahhhh, Steph that was amazing.
I am absolutley in love with the chapter.
Deffiently your best chapter so far and I love how much depth you gave to Shadowed.
Shadowed Nuclear seems like a real person now, not simply a story character.
Love you <3

Aahhhh AMAZING! I love being drugged up! it's not dog shit! it's pieee!!! (and yet I came up with that perfectly sober ;) )

New reader!!! I love this story, it's got such a great plot compared to over Killjoy ones. Update soon, please!

I've just finished!
Almost nine pages and about 4000 words give or take a few.
Super proud of myself :) xxx

Yay! Just hurry up! I have nothing to read! Xx

And I have yet more to write :)
Mwuhahahaha, super long chapter from me! xxx

A third!!! But you'd written three pages in Chemistry!!! XD xx

About a third of the way through already
I will be done very soon :)
Something tells me I'm the quickest updater ;) I love this story so much! xxxx