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  • which-witch

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    WOW! I really like this! Very good job. There were a few things with sentence structure, but overall, very well done.
    December 6th, 2010 at 03:33am
  • katybug

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    i love it, keep writing!
    December 6th, 2010 at 01:19am
  • Meres

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    I like this, it is very well written, and it doesn't have a cliche happy ending.
    Awesome work! :D
    December 6th, 2010 at 12:50am
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