Crossing Blurred Lines - Comments

I love love love this story! (: update soon!? (:

update this adorable shit right this second!!!!!!!

LOVE IT SO FAR!

Soo Kristen, freaking amazing chapter.
Caleb is so fucking cute.
Aaannd Kat, great chapter as well. I don't know why, but I really like Garrett's POV.
More soon, yes? :)

i really adore Caleb. he's so fuckin' cute haha.
I love it's still the same story line but It's CALEB and GARRETT <3
With a tiny bit of John and Kyle.

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeehhhhhhh!!!
I just want to hug them both so much! They're soooo cute!
^_^
updateupdateupdate soon please =]

NO! NO!

Go backk!

Gah..

You updated too fast and I wasn't home..
Now I missed on commenting on a chapter...

I loved it.. Even if you did ruin my record. lol

Anyways, I'm going to make this the longest comment ever.

AMAZINGGGG. Hold on, I'm stil reading the 2nd chapter..

Okay, I'm back.

....

Wow..

I have this thing when stuff get's awkward I just stop reading..
It's happened alot in the 2nd chapter... Especially the shower part which
made me get all tingly inside.

"CALEB. HOLY SHIT MAN. KNOCK NEXT TIME."[\b]

I've never seen Garrett the type to yell.. lol
But now I do.. That must have sucked too be naked..

I mean not for Caleb obviously.. xDDD

"Eyes up here bud."

I love Garrett's cheeky moments.

Alright.. This is pretty long..

I'm happy with it..

Dudes, I couldn't stop smiling through the whole chapter!
and my brother called me a weirdo.. xD

Awww(:
I swear, it made my day when I saw this got updated AGAIN. :3

Awww.
You're so cute Caleb.
GO CUDDLE!
Update soon?(:

'There's this adorably-attractive man sitting on my tour bus right now.'

Yep. That pretty much sums up Garrett! :D
I love this story, it's so cute :)

ahhhhhh they're so cute already!!!!
Control that untamed mind Caleb you nasty little boy - no, don't control that mind. Where's the fun in that? ;)
loved the update...more soon please?

really sweet story :)

I love your story and PLZ PLZ UPDATE!

WHOAH.
So.. It's like gonna be on tour during the same time as John and Kyle's
relation ship fires up?

Amaizingggg.

I love this chapter for 2 majorly big reason.

1) I had been looking to have fun on a tour, not turn bi and start a relationship with some random guy. I loved that sentence. I laughed out loud..

2)No, it was probably that I had looked like a loon, shaking my head to myself and all. Haha.. Aww.. Garrett.. such a loon. What is a loon? I'm planning on going and calling my brother a loon.. But I want to make sure it doesn't mean something too bad...

Yeahhh. He's a tattle tell.

So, I just blabbered on and on pointlessly..

LOVED THE CHAPTER!

I can't wait for more of this wonderfulness :D
jghsdljhgldsgh'sd

It's finally started! :'D
Can't wait for more of this. I'm super excited.

I love Garrett. <3
Can't wait to see where this goes! :D

:) Super sweet start. Looking forward to reading

I'm glad I found this update before I went to bed! :D

I cannot wait for this to start up! Yay!